Wednesday, February 24, 2016

REVIEW: Madly by Amy Alward



A royal mess.
Samantha Kemi comes from a long line of old-school alchemists, which has fallen on hard times.
When thoroughly modern Princess Evelyn is poisoned by a positively ancient love potion, a hunt is called to find an antidote.
Winning this hunt will revive Sam’s family’s reputation. And soon Sam is traveling the world for the rarest ingredients, venturing deep into magical forests and frozen tundras, facing death at every turn.
Sam’s greatest threat? Zain Aster, her foremost opponent on the hunt. Rumor has it he was the intended recipient of the princess’s love potion. With that smile, it’s not hard to see why…
Falling for Zain is a terrible idea. So why can’t Sam get him out of her mind? Is this magic at work?

This book was laden with tropes and clichés, and not all of them good. Amy Alward, because of her job, knows exactly what a proper young adult book needs. She had an interesting premise, a plot that moves, characters with drive and goals, and a nicely built world. That being said, the story was in no way riveting. I enjoyed it, but I enjoy a lot of books that don’t necessarily receive/deserve high ratings.
The book started with a great trope: modern fairytale. I don’t think I’ve read any stories that are clearly a fairytale such as this, but set in a super digital age. It was an interesting mix that hooked me from the beginning. However, the story was Ella Enchanted but less riveting and entertaining. The characters had wants but no real developed pasts. Sam is destined to be a great alchemist (the only thing I loved from her was reading her alchemical knowledge when she listed qualities off for different ingredients), and Zain is destined to take over ZoroCorp. Neither of them thinks that’s what they want, but they know it’s what they’ll do in the end. Boring. Bad cliché. And don’t get me wrong, I love when families are happy and whole, but it’s like nothing bad has ever happened in Nova and everyone has such an easy life. None of the characters had the depth of a hard life or lost parents. The characters were all flat.
The plot, in turn, was flat. Even when Kirsty takes someone close to Sam into the Wilds, I felt nothing. I was just, “thank you, finally we have some tragic action”. I mean, the plot was good and there. The big plot moments happened, and the hero fell in love with a boy supposedly in love with another. Such a bad cliché.
The whole book just fell short because of rotten clichés, and pacing of all things. The book wasn’t super short, but everything felt so rushed. It was all the exciting plot humps you’d expect out of a trilogy, but rolled into one book. It was such a rushed pace, and nothing bad happened! A few scrapes and bruises, but nothing dire. Nobody died, and that’s a problem for me, because nothing heightened the adventure for me. The stakes weren’t raised enough. Emilia ended up fizzing out as a threat. Evelyn fizzed out too, and she never did any real harm. Everything was so vanilla and boring. I enjoyed the book, but I don’t need to read the rest of the series because as far as I can see, the series is done. She did her thing and got the guy. Hooray, but I don’t feel any need whatsoever to continue reading. Sure, some books are still missing, but I’m utterly unconcerned.
Bad pacing and even worse clichés have turned this play on a modernized fairytale into a womp-zone. Amy Alward’s Madly is a cheesy, easy read with zero depth, and that’s disappointing. Also, I still have no idea how Zain didn’t get the love potion. I read Princess Evelyn’s chapters, and I don’t understand how she mixed them up. Is she just dumb or what? And when there’s a fundamental error like that, we’ve got a problem for sure.

XOXO Tia

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